D - MY poem PLEASE READ - DOES IT SAY ANYTHING TO YOU?

It's really good. And I'm not just saying that because of what you've been through. You should not be ashamed. You should be proud that you are getting through it. Your sentence structure and imagery get across so much. I like the "poisoned mind, venomous heart" especially. I would maybe replace "gazelle" with another animal though, it's a bit of a predictable word choice. Also, I would replace one of "reputation, no consolation,self deprivation- his manipulation" as this is a little bit samey. Maybe take out "no consolation".